A story retold through narrated illustrations.
heyrog - 2 years ago
lick my critoris: viewing this in 0.08 bac state made it sublimely hilarious. drunk ms paint animation about coitus grundlemane = priceless teresa and jen need to loosen their chastity belts
transhume - 2 years ago
seriousness: while writing a break comment has really bothered me here, and I wish there were more responses regarding getting laid. Leave that shit for class, this is here for a reason. <3 some of you anyways
edlarry - 2 years ago
from lance: mainly interested in the drawings. story could be really interesting, hints at failed oedipal idea, is there any reason you cannot make the points that interest you more explicit (not xxx, but more overt?) How about subtext?
franfox - 2 years ago
from fran: While I thought the spoken narrative during the video wasn’t very funny, I found the depiction of one or two of the characters somewhat humorous. Particularly the crude drawings of the two lumpy characters with neon eyes and hardly any teeth (but the ones they had were dazzling white). Overall, I felt indifferent to what I assume was intended to be an outrageous narrative. The video game intro set me up to expect exaggerated violence, sex, etc. so I wasn’t surprised when that’s what I got.
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estefano - 2 years ago
from ellie: i suppose i agree with jen on some levels. it's a bit too over the top for me in terms of sexual content (and i'm no prude...) i wish it was a bit more subtle. i do think it is better than the last one, in that it has a clearly developed storyline. however, i am confused as to why you chose to tell someone else's story instead of writing your own...
teresafromschool - 2 years ago
@estefanocrit from teresa: i tried to register and it didn't work- what a pain in the ass. i am so confused. who is ted aronson? what is boner jams? why did you re-tell this guy's story? listening to some guy talk really slowly for 3 minutes is really boring- i had to struggle to watch the whole thing. the sexual explicitness, is in some aspects, over the top, but also really predictable.
@estefanocrit from teresa: nevermind, i guess it did work
chamad - 2 years ago
Crit from jen: My first reaction is that this is muuuch better than the last go around. It is much funnier and although obviously sexually blatant, it also has some nice subtlety going on. I wish there were more of that. There are moments that are too explicit for me, like when you say "A giant penis shaped monster" yeah, i know it's penis shaped and if i didn't know that, then i don't deserve to be told. I would rather you didn't tell those moments but let the animation tell them for you. I would a
hassha - 2 years ago
uh, this is Sunx from crit class: the "Tits Region" hahaha
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Coitus Grundlemane: begs you to rate and vote him to the homepage!!!
mogog - 2 years ago
@transhumeuh: wtf?
CanuckPlumber - 2 years ago
@transhumePerhaps...: you need to get laid.... This was lame.
